Wednesday, March 13, 2013

Alone in the Night- Jordan Sampson

I imagine how it would be if I were up there with no air
All alone in the night
The stars makes it bright 
And brings back my sight
While I'm all alone in the night 


ABOUT THE AUTHOR
This author is not famous right now. I believe this author is a teenager or a college student right now. The biography tells that this poet wrote his poem starting from 2010. I hope this person becomes famous in the future so that more information about this poet would be known.

PERSONAL RESPONSE
This poem tells about darkness, but I believe the setting sounds like it was taking place in space. It was talking about how you can’t see anything in the dark, but the stars brighten the view, allowing you to see anything in the night. For a text-to-text connection, the poem reminds of a movie that said something about how everything is dark in the night, but the stars will brighten the view for the little child. So the child did not feel too scared to sleep in the dark. For a text-to-self connection, the poem reminds of when I was a kid, and I was afraid of the dark, but my parents would say God will always be with me, even in the dark. He would be the bright light I need when I need the light in the dark. This pretty much helped me overcome the fear of darkness. For a text-to-world connection, many parents would pretty much sympathize with the poem, for the poem relates to how the parents can tell their kids about not being afraid of the dark, for there is always an available light in the sky. I really liked the part where the phrase in the poem tells about how the bright light from the stars bring back the sight. It sounds similar like ‘Amazing Grace’. I would suggest the poem to be longer. Not because there is not much details available, but I want to know more about how the poet would represent the darkness as, compared to what light is.


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TITLE
The title is based on a pretty dark and grieving tone, and the title gives you the feeling that the title sounds lonely. I thought this kind of poem was pretty eerie to read at first because of the title, but the detail was not that bad.

PARAPHRASE

I imagine how it would be if I were up there with no air
All alone in the night
The stars would make the sky shine bright 
And brings back my lost sight
While I'm all alone in the dark, gloomy night


CONNOTATION
1. structure- 1 quatrain, rhyme scheme- abbbb
2. speaker- the poet putting his view in a dark night audience- the readers
3. Figurative language- none
4. Imagery- Sight (bring back my sight, stars, shine bright), taste- none- touch- none, hear- none

ATTITUDE
the speaker's tone is not so dark, but it has the tone color of lost hope in it for the first two line of the poem. But the tone changed to a bit brighter side starting from line 3.

SHIFT
1st quatrain (line 1-5) The speaker's tome had no energy in it, but the tone starts to be confident as each lines of the poem is read.

TITLE
After going through the poem, I didn't feel any difference in the title, but I would say that the poem is so dark, but it tries to describe how life would be like being alone in the night,

THEME 
1. Even in the dark, there will always be a light
2. Do not be afraid of the dark
3. Think every moment like 'Amazing Grace'

REFERENCE
Sampson, J. (2010). Alone in the night. Retrieved from http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/alone-in-the-night-6/

Why I love you- Udiah (witness to Yah)

You give to me hope
And help me to cope
When life pulls me down
You bring me around

You teach me to care
And help me to share
You make me honest
With kindness the best

From you I learned love
With grace from above
It's for you I live
And I want to give

You are the reason
That fills each season
When I hear love I think of you
You are my world and best friend too

I love you because you are so kind, thoughtful and caring
I love you because you are so pleasant, lovely and sharing

You made me the man I am
Thank you


ABOUT THE AUTHOR

There is no information about this author, but it tells that the author was born in 1959 in the USA. Except for that, there are not many information about the poet yet. Maybe more details about this poet will come out in the later future. 


PERSONAL RESPONSE

I have nothing to say about this poem. This poem tells about love, but the thing is that this poem exactly matches my feeling. I’ll explain that in the text-to-self connection. The poem basically is saying how the person the man loved changed the man to become stronger than before. For a text-to-text connection, the poem has a lot of relating dialogues that happens throughout love story movies. For a text-to-self connection, the poem sounds like it’s exactly talking to me or it’s me talking to me in a mirror. The poem generally relates to how I feel toward a certain girl I like. Though I am not in a relationship with her, I have to say, she changed me to become a bit confident and stronger than the former me. One day, I would love to be in a relationship with her. For a text-to-world connection, many guys would feel the same toward their lover. Women have the power to change men to a different person (in a positive way). I really liked this poem because the poem was ‘speaking’ to the readers, and it is saying the truth in every single way. I have no other suggestions to put in this poem. This poem sounded perfect to me. Single or not, the poem has a similar advice of what it feels like to be in a relationship or planning to become a couple with the lover. Reading this poem give me goose bumps. It’s almost as if the poet was reading my mind and then he create a poem about this.

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TITLE

The title says it all. It represent about why the person loves this person, and it tells about how the person he/she loves changed the person into a stronger person. The title also tells you that this poem would be based on a description on why he/she loves her.

PARAPHRASING



You give to me hope
And help me to cope
When life pulls me further down
You bring me the other way
around


You teach me to care
And help me to share
You make me become honest
With kindness makes the best

From you I learned love
With grace from above
It's for you I live
And I want to give 

You are the reason
That fills each season
When I hear love, I always think about you
You are my world and also my best friend too

I love you because you are so kind, thoughtful and caring
I love you because you are so pleasant, lovely and sharing

You made me the man I am today
 I thank you everyday


CONNOTATION

1. structure- 5 quatrain and couplet, rhyme scheme- a-a-b-c-d-d-e-e-f-f-f-f-g-g-h-h-i-i-j-k, end rhyme, punctuation- comma, period.
2. speaker- a man telling or writing a letter to a person that he loves and tells about how he changed a lot because of that person. Audience- the person the speaker is telling/writing to.
3. Imagery- sight (think about you, friend,lovely,teach), touch (bring me around), taste- none, hear (hear love), smell- none

ATTITUDE

sincere, bright, peaceful, joy, enchanting. The tone of this poem is very bright, for it does not tell about depressing moments, but about love and about how good it was. I never written a love poem, but I've read a lot of love poem, so this kind of poem is very familiar to me.

SHIFT

1st quatrain (line 1-4)- the speaker tells how the person he/she loves was able to save the speaker's life mentally
2nd quatrain (line 5-8)- the speaker is learning how to change from the former self from the lover
3rd quatrain (line 9-12)- the tone turns bright as the speaker tells about how amazingly the speaker's lover changed the former self of the speaker
4th quatrain (line 13-16)- the lover is the only person the speaker sees and thinks about 
(line 17-18) the speaker tells why he loves her
(line 19-20) says thank you to the lover for making the person the man is today

TITLE
The title shows a bigger meaning behind the words than before. For this poem matches my love for someone, putting more thought on the title was able to make me dig deeper into the true meaning of the title easier than trying to think again about the title of other poems.

THEME
1. Love is more than it seems
2. people can truly change from love
3. you can learn a lot just from love

REFERENCE
U.(2012). Why i love you. Retrieved from http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/why-i-love-you-45/